in the fog

Ah yes, the start of another wonderful week.

There was some cool fog out this morning on the way in to the office. I like the fog. It was especially impressive hanging over the river downtown.

I don’t know about you, but I could really use another day of weekend. The last two days just flew by. I feel like I was shorted a day some how. We weren’t really that busy. Our schedule wasn’t very full. It’s gone though. The weekend is gone.

On Saturday K and I rearranged the house. Yep it’s pretty crazy now at the homestead. The Baltimore crew won’t recognize the house they are in. We moved the front room into the dining room and the dining room into the front room. Our front room which is now in the dining room is quite a bit cozier now. The front room that is now the dining room looks like a fancy bed and breakfast restaurant thingy. It will be much better for dining come this Thanksgiving. The changes were quite disorienting at first but I think I am starting to get use to it now. The TV sound system sounds more powerful in it’s new location and set up.

We got an extra hour of sleep due to moving our clocks back but I don’t think I reaped the benefits of the extra hour due to staying up late on Sunday night.

Well I’ve got to get to work. I’m excited today because I have an audio book to listen to. I bought it on Friday from iTunes. I have about 22 hours left to listen to. The book I got is “The World Is Flat” by Thomas L. Friedman. It’s a book about globalization, outsourcing and the state of communications and business on the planet. So far so good. It’s kind of cool reading a book while working. It does take a bit of concentration to get all of what the actor reading the book is saying.

harpoon across the bow of Holy

Guten tag!

How are you doing this fine Sunday morning? I’m doing quite well. Good.

Well my television show idea received another blow last night while we were watching and finishing up the first disc of the 2nd season of Lost.

I’m trying figure out how this happened. You may remember I was a tad stymied several posts ago when I discovered that a friend of mine had similiar ideas for a TV show they were working on. I kind of blame the whole synchronicity or coincidence business. Sure, great minds think alike.

There is a pattern here though that I followed in coming up with my ideas. I think people have already picked up the pattern and are way ahead of me on the trail. If I figure out how I got to the pattern then I should be able to veer the pattern off into a different direction.

I first started thinking about writing a television show after seeing the original Wicker Man movie. At that time I thought, “Man, somebody should remake that movie for today’s audience”. Little did I know somebody already was. I’ve heard the remake isn’t very good. I haven’t seen it yet but plan on it. The remake of Wicker Man that was in my head was good though for sure. I began to think that I should put my money where my mouth was and start getting my ideas out on paper. If I had the thought that Wicker Man should be remade into a movie and somebody else also thought the same thing, then who’s to say that one of my other thoughts isn’t being put down on paper by someone else right now?

Then I started lamenting the state of reality shows on television. “If we only had HBO”. K and I loved renting the series “Six Feet Under” and “The Sopranos”. It is still possible to have to really great shows on television. It’s not all just “Deal or No Deal”.

Imagine a World where a show like Twin Peaks is introduced into the Fall Season line up. Gosh, wouldn’t it be great if there was a show like Twin Peaks on the broadcast channels again?

Right around this time in my thinking, I was aware that the show Lost was out there. I hadn’t seen any of the episodes and didn’t really know what it was about. I knew that people had crashed a plane on a tropical island and that strange things were happening to them on this mysterious island. I remember noting that it seemed like this show Lost was getting the same kind of press that Twin Peaks was getting when it was on the air. Maybe this show was the new Twin Peaks that I had been praying for?

So I did have this show that I hadn’t seen called Lost in the back of my mind when I started thinking up my television series.

We started watching several episodes of the old British TV series “The Prisoner”. I then thought, “Gosh, wouldn’t it be great if there was a funky show like The Prisoner on TV now days?” While looking to see and discovering that they are making a Prisoner Remake, I also found an article where J.J. Abrams, the creator of Lost praised The Prisoner as one of the influences for his show. Hmm. That show Lost comes up again. I bet I would really like it. I also began to think that I shouldn’t watch it though because it might influence the work on my own television show.

The pattern is now formed for my show I am calling “Holy” (I did notice right away that Holy was a one word title just like Lost). It would be a combination of the movie “Wicker Man”, the television show “The Prisoner”, with the surreal elements of “Twin Peaks”.

Now having watched the first season of Lost, I can kind of see the framework for all of the shows. There is something very similar. These shows are all built around the idea of the characters interacting with a mysterious environment. In Wicker Man there is the mysterious island that must be investigated by the police detective. In the Prisoner, Number 6 has to figure out how to break out of the Village and get off of the island. In Twin Peaks the town of Twin Peaks is the setting for a number of bizarre events. In Lost we have another mysterious island where bizarre events occur.

In creating the idea for my show Holy I can see how I must be intrigued by the notion of characters reacting to a mysterious environment. In Holy I had thought of this place called Techah (I might still use it) which was a city that the characters were creating on the Oregon Coast (not on an island) where interesting and sometimes mysterious things occur. I have been reading quite a bit about communal living and utopian societies and was going to have Techah be an attempt at a utopia.

I can see that the idea of characters reacting to their mysterious environments isn’t an original plot device. Many shows use this and will continue to use this. I think I may still use some of this for Holy, but thanks to Lost (and the direction I think it’s heading), I am going to have to rethink a large chunk of my story.

I’m starting to think that Lost might be the show that I wish I was writing.

I always appreciate when people writing about shows that people may not have seen yet indicate when a spoiler that may ruin the surprise of the show is coming up. We are only to disc 2 of season 2 of Lost so if you haven’t seen up to that point don’t read the following spoiler. I also realize that Lost is well into season 3 and several of you already know what is going on. Please don’t be a jerk and spoil anything for me.

LOST SPOILER:

We are at the point now where Jack and Locke have made it down into the hatch and have discovered the weird underground bunker. The computer gets shot and Desmond tells them that they should go watch the instructional film that explains why the bunker is there and why they have to keep entering the code into the computer. In a great scene that I have now watched 3 times, Jack and Locke load up and watch the grainy film. The film talks about the history of something called Dharma Initiative. From what we can tell so far it appears that the island that they crashed on in Lost is actually and experiment to create a large scale communal research compound.

I think around this time I said to K, “Well there it goes”.

The island of the Lost series now seems (as far as we have gotten so far in the series) to be the results of a failed attempt at what the characters in my story Holy are trying to create with their city Techah. An experiment trying to create a utopian society. The Dharma Initiative even has a wealthy financial backer and European urban planner architect guy like I was planning on having in my story.

We are really going to have to speed up our viewing to get caught up. Everywhere you look on the internet seems to have a spoiler for Lost. I just discovered that Wikipedia has an entry for the Dharma Initiative (I didn’t read it). If we were caught up to season 3 I could actually read some of this stuff.

(END OF SPOILER)

Okay I feel a little bit better after that long post. We actually went to breakfast with Lianne and Martin before I could finish this post and I talked to them about my television writing dilemmas.

After laying out the patterns here I’m feeling a little bit better about where I could differentiate it enough so that Holy doesn’t seem like a Lost rip off. I’m definitely not doing a “hey I thought of that first” thing here. I’m just trying to see how similar ideas for stories can be affected through similar tastes in source materials and inspiration. Perhaps I came to the same conclusions as the Lost creators because we both wanted to see similar television shows based on the same previous shows that we liked back on television.
It’s good that I am finding similar ideas as the Lost people. Now I need to use that as a tool to see where my story is going and take it into a different direction. I’ve noticed a few directions in the pattern that I could explore.

That being said I’m sure there are thousands of blogs out there claiming to have thought of similar Lost plot points.

I’ve got to go wash the dishes now.

needs more action and drama

We wrapped up season one of Lost last night. That show. It’s like freaking sugar. Or would it be cocaine? We blasted through the last disc of the season in one sitting. 4 episodes. Now we’ll watch season 2 and almost be caught up. There have been 4 episodes of season 3 already right?

I have been reading how-to books on screenwriting over the last few weeks.
I think I’m going to need more action in my television script. Maybe I should stop watching Lost while trying to work on my show. That thing is overly packed with drama and action.

Is that true though? I think that it’s just easier to spot in a show like Lost because the conflicts, emotion and motivations are so apparent. It’s brilliant in it’s animalistic simplicity. It’s not complicated. The plane crashes, you’re stuck on an island and you are struggling to survive. There’s some sort of mysterious monster out in the jungle. You want to shoot the guy because he killed your brother. There’s lots of heroism in it also.

I think my show might be too complicated.
Mr. Carson calls a board meeting because he is planning on buying the remaining shares of the company. He takes it back to being privately owned so he can continue on with the construction of the colony without interference from the public stockholders.

Yawn. I need to add more conflict. More animalistic simplicity. Maybe I should add a monster to the mix.

Taking the corporation out of the controlling hands of the public is an important element of the plot, I’m just going to have to spice it up.

I read an article in the New York Times yesterday that said that everyone and their mother wants to be a writer now days. From the taxi driver to your real estate broker all of them are working on a novel, a script for a movie, or a television series. Me too huh? I guess I’m just one of millions. I’ve got company. At first I was kind of bummed out by this info. It’s not surprising though. We all want to make it big don’t we? The thing that stands me out from the rest of the crowd is my talent and truly original concepts and creative ideas. Yeah that’s right. You’ll see, suckers! I think being with the crowd of people who want to write stories is much better than being in the much larger crowd of people who aren’t writing stories.

Gosh, it’s already Thursday? The week flew by didn’t it?

videographer

Hey there. How’s it what up?
I was away from my cube yesterday.

It doesn’t seem like I missed much being unwired for a day. See Noodle, you don’t have to stay constantly plugged in. You can relax and stay away from the internets and emails for at least a day.

I was tapped here at the studio to go on a photo shoot and document it with video. I was a videographer again for a day. It was pretty fun. I shot the photographer shooting. The photo shoot was of football players looking all football player like. We were shooting photos of the football players for a certain exercise machine company up in Vancouver. We got rained on for most of the day.

It was a good experience.

Video work so far has been the only thing I’ve done professionally that I went to school for.

I’m back in my cube. Business as usual today. I can sit in my comfortable chair all day and stay dry.

yes good. very good

Had a pretty good weekend.
Do I say good too much?

It’s Monday. Mondays not good.

The dog park Boston terrier play date was pretty fun on Saturday. It was crazy. There were Bostons everywhere. We think that there were about 30. It was so funny to see all the crazy little Phillip clones running around. It was strange to see how much Phillip has mellowed out compared to some of those other kids. He was the elder statesman. Some of those pups were nuts! If you kneeled down to pet one you would be mobbed by ten more in no time flat. They wouldn’t stop to let me take their photos. I got some shots that I’ll post up.

It was fun. I think we’ll go to the next one.

I did some good writing over the weekend. I made some headway with my television screenplay. I made a notes poster and started outlining the pilot episode. I’ve decided to do a series outline and a 40 – 60 page script for the pilot. Once I’ve got those elements complete I’m going to go out and sell it.

One thing I decided or I guess figured out is that I have to write my TV show during the times when I’m not feeling it. I’ve said here before that during the morning hours my TV idea makes perfect sense and then when the evening rolls around it seems like the dumbest idea in the World. That’s when I have to work on it. During the dumb periods. I think it will be a more solid story if I hammer it out when it seems difficult.

It’s probably going to be a busy week here at the office. I’m going to try to be a good worker this week. I might even work some overtime. While I’m trying to work hard I probably won’t post as many blog entries. Maybe I’ll have to update the journal at home in the evening.

Hola Mi Amigos!

The German class last night went pretty well. Thanks for asking.
I think it’s going to be pretty tough at first. I’m going to put a good effort in. They say it gets easier as you go.

I kept slipping into Spanish. That’s weird huh? I didn’t know I knew that much Spanish.

The Germans left some German music on a server here. I was sampling some of it this morning. There were a couple of tunes I was on the verge of liking.

Another Friday is upon us. It was a pretty good week.
I am looking forward to an excellent weekend.
I’m going to try and sleep very little so that I can make the weekend last longer.

Yeah, that isn’t going to happen. I’m going to sleep quite a bit this weekend.

Maybe somewhere in between.
I haven’t been very good at sleeping in lately.

We’ve got a couple of schemes planned for the weekend.

We are taking Phillip to a Boston Terrier meet tomorrow morning. I think it’s a halloween costume party. K hasn’t shown me Phillip’s costume yet. It should be pretty funny to see a bunch of Bostons gathered in one place. I’ll take along the camera for you.

There was also some whispers about a chili feed coming some time soon.

German class

And the rain came down.

At least it’s not that cold yet.

I need one of those old lady, plastic sheet, hair cover things. You know the one that grandma always wore to church. What do you call those? Plastic scarf? Shawl? No, a shawl is for you shoulders.

Tonight is my first German class.
Our studio has a sister studio in Germany with whom we share work. The boss man decided that he would pay for a company to come in and give us German language training. Pretty cool. I’m not sure how many weeks the course goes for.

I’m a little nervous. My only other language training was Spanish in high school. I wasn’t into it at the time and got a D. That is one of the many classes now that I wish I would have tried harder in back then.

Spanish would be good to learn. I would enjoy learning Spanish now I think.
There are some free Spanish courses that K can get us into at her school.

That will have to be after German though. More than one language would be hard for me to juggle. I have enough trouble with English.

People that can speak 3+ languages are so cool.

drink more water

I’m a tad sleepy this morning.
I slept alright last night. Sunday night I barely slept at all.

When I asked a coworker named Dai, many years ago, why I was sleepy all the time, he said in his wise voice,
“You need to drink more water. Then you will have more energy”

That makes sense to me. I really should drink more water. I should START drinking water.
I had a tall glass before I got on the bus this morning.
I think I feel better than I did yesterday at this time.
I’ll have a pint of water after I finish this pint of black coffee.

I’ve talked about the need for drinking water in this journal before haven’t I? This is a journalistic rerun! Look out!
It’s kind of refreshing and peaceful having topics that are only to the level of importance as the need to drink more water.
No serious political discussion about the coming midterm elections here!

We had a pretty stuffed weekend. Lots of places to be and family to see.
I had forgotten that we had to go to a wedding at the coast on Saturday. The wedding was nice. Congratulations to family friend, the bride, Marsha.

We hung out at my aunt and uncle’s new house in Newburg after that. Had a good visit with the grandparents.

Taking Saturday out of your sleep in, lounge around, do your own thing equation, makes for a short weekend. I didn’t get any reading or writing done.

I did bust out a lot of chicken scratch notes for my story while working yesterday. My snail’s pace is slow but steady. I’m getting stuff done in slow motion.

Well, we took the plunge! We watched the first disc, season 1 of Lost. Yep, I am one of those people now. We have got a ways to go to catch up to present day season 3. Lost is pretty amazing structure wise. We were hooked in the first 2 minutes.

I was studying the pilot closely to figure out how it was working. I was hoping to get some hints for my pilot writing. It’s a pretty simple plot starting out and then blossoms out with complexity with each new episode. The show works by pulling you into the interesting stories that develop through the characters.

The next 2 discs in the series are coming in the mail tomorrow.

Hey, there are 300 million citizens in the United States as of this morning.

Happy 13th!

Friday the 13th today folks. Play it safe. Be careful. Keep your eyes peeled. Friday the 13th doesn’t hold the same amount of evil for me as Cinco De Mayo does, but I’m still going to be on guard.

Rah for the weekend. My grandparents are in town this weekend so we will probably be doing family things. Should be okay. I haven’t seen grammy and grand pappy in a while so it will be nice visiting with them.

I want to get some writing in. I’m starting to think that I am going to have to create a writing schedule or nothing is going to get done. Only writing on the weekend is going too slow. I’m not getting anywhere. I think I am going to start getting up at 5 in the morning to write. I can do it. I’m getting older now. The older you get the easier it is to get up at ungodly hours I hear. The elderly barely need any sleep at all right? I’m going to try this 5 in the morning thing out next week. Get up at 5, write for an hour and then get ready for the work day.

I am listening to “The Fragile” by my beloved Nine Inch Nails right now. Thanks to Officer Steve who pointed me to the movie trailer for “300“. That trailer reminded a coworker and myself how much we love The Fragile. It features the song “Just Like You Imagined” from that album. I was doing the, “Hey what song is that? I know I know it” bit.

Holy, Holy, Holy

I’m going to need a new coat. I’m not happy with my current coat situation. I want a coat that I am in love with. Something that I enjoy putting on. A coat that looks and feels good. This morning I wore my thick wool shirt thing with all but one button missing and that’s just not doing it for me. I should go shopping for a coat now before it gets too cold.

Speaking of cold, I think a cold or flu bug is threatening to catch me. It keeps coming and going. I felt like crap yesterday and then it wore off last night. On Tuesday night I had what seemed like the start of a migraine that kicked my butt. Everyone at the office is sniffling or calling in sick. I can’t let it get me. It might be nice to take a sick day though and rest. Hmm. Maybe I should embrace the sickness.

Last night the boss man paid for some of us to go to a lecture at PSU. It was kind of cool. The speaker was portrait photographer Michael Grecco. He presented his work and talked about the importance of good lighting. He had some nice photos. I picked up a few good pointers for my work at the office. Yeah, so I was hanging with the photographer crowd. Does this mean I have accepted my fate and crossed over to the dark side forever? I’m usually hanging with the web crowd at web lecture thingys.

I’ve pieced together the motion picture soundtrack for my television show. This is the soundtrack that you would buy after hearing a song that you liked on the week’s episode. I think it’s a pretty good mix. I will listen to this disc to help me capture the mood of the show as I am typing. Here’s the track list song / artist so you can make the same disc at home.

1. Rollin’ Tumblin’ (Remix) / R.L. Burnside
2. Holy, Holy, Holy / London Festival Orchestra
3. Cowgirl / Underworld
4, What Else Is There? / Royksopp
5. Hey Mama / Black Eyed Peas
6. Resolution / Photek
7. Les Yper-Sound / Stereolab
8. Wishing Well / Porno For Pyros
9. Future / Zero 7
10. Hammer Without a Master / Broadcast
11. New Round / Beck
12. Royksopp’s Night Out / Royksopp
13. And It Rained All Night / Thom Yorke
14. Ghostwriter / RJD2
15. My Elastic Eye / The Chemical Brothers
16. Motoroller Scalatron / Stereolab